My Favorite Teacher

注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(3)题目已为你写好。
参考词汇:kind善良的,patient耐心的,role model榜样
要求:
语句通顺,语法正确,条理清晰,表达完整。

📖读题

引出老师

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我有一位好老师。她善良又有耐心。

📖读题

描述老师的行为

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她总是很早到学校。课堂上,她认真地教我们知识。当我们有问题时,她一遍又一遍地帮助我们。

📖读题

教导学生

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她还告诉我们要做好学生。

📖读题

表达情感

✍️写句子

我非常爱我的老师。她是我伟大的榜样。

我有一位好老师。她善良又有耐心。她总是很早到学校。课堂上,她认真地教我们知识。当我们有问题时,她一遍又一遍地帮助我们。她还告诉我们要做好学生。我非常爱我的老师。她是我伟大的榜样。

📌word choice

nice teacher, kind

🧩sentence construction

I have a nice teacher. She is kind.

📌word choice

comes to school early, teaches us knowledge, helps us, tells us to be good students

🧩sentence construction

She comes to school early. In class, she teaches us knowledge. When we have questions, she helps us. She also tells us to be good students.

📌word choice

love my teacher, role model

🧩sentence construction

I love my teacher. She is a role model for me.

I have a nice teacher. She is kind.

She comes to school early. In class, she teaches us knowledge. When we have questions, she helps us. She also tells us to be good students.

I love my teacher. She is a role model for me.

基础分:I have a nice teacher. She is kind. She comes to school early. In class, she teaches us knowledge. When we have questions, she helps us. She also tells us to be good students. I love my teacher. She is a role model for me.
良好分:I have a nice teacher. She is kind and patient. She always comes to school early. In class, she teaches us knowledge carefully. When we have questions, she helps us again and again. She also tells us to be good students. I love my teacher very much. She is a great role model for me.
优秀分:I have a nice teacher. She is kind and patient. She always comes to school early. In class, she teaches us knowledge carefully. When we have questions, she helps us again and again. She also tells us to be good students. I love my teacher very much. She is a great role model for me.

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